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仿佛桃源故人至,原来一朝南柯梦。 (noin)
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等 级:二级特佐
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发表时间:2002/6/15 23:57:25
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内容做了很大幅度的润色和丰富,内涵也比开始的几稿强多了。确实是有努力的,不错不错。值得期待。
错别字暂时没找到,但是一些点错位置的标点符号自己修改一下吧。
http://oz.cnmsl.net
The Minstrel Boy will return we pray
When we hear the news, we all will cheer it,
The minstrel boy will return one day,
Torn perhaps in body, not in spirit.
Then may he play on his harp in peace,
In a world such as Heaven intended,
For all the bitterness of man must cease,
And ev´ry battle must be ended.
(Black Hawn Down)
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