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仿佛桃源故人至,原来一朝南柯梦。 (noin)
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发表时间:2002/6/14 15:47:27
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基本上以T的角度去阐述,但是这个角色已经有主儿了。
如小五所言细节方面需要推敲的地方不少,我下去慢慢看,回头给你意见。^_^
还是那句话,作为[罗生门]练笔非常可惜。我收下,作为一般投稿处理。OK?(其实就是逼迫再出一篇新的正式的罗生门~~)
辛苦了,考试加油~~
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The Minstrel Boy will return we pray
When we hear the news, we all will cheer it,
The minstrel boy will return one day,
Torn perhaps in body, not in spirit.
Then may he play on his harp in peace,
In a world such as Heaven intended,
For all the bitterness of man must cease,
And ev´ry battle must be ended.
(Black Hawn Down)
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